Red face
Cheeks hot
Rollercoaster ride
Stomach sqeezed
Hold on tight...
Humiliation.
Author notes
Ugh blah
Any title idears?
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eew that's grooooooss dude!
i think u should repace "squeezing" with "heaving" b/c its more commonly used. and give it a title so peeps are warned.
luv,
lilz
ps only 2 clappers b/c im so grossed out. say hi to michael 4 me!
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haha okay i ll say hi to michael
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Ugh blah? You think ugh blah about rollercoasters?
Oh...wait...did you throwup or something...yeah, that is deffinatly humiliating.
Anyways, Nice description and great poem, especially the last line!
Title suggestions? ummm...Humiliation? ummmm...
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Um Katrina, the poem's about humiliation, not rollercoasters lol. haha well you made me laugh It's comparing humiliation to a rollercoaster.
I have yet to throw up on a rollercoaster, YES!!
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