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Red face
Cheeks hot
Rollercoaster ride
Stomach sqeezed
Hold on tight...

Humiliation.

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Ugh blah

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  • my02U
    September 24, 2008

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    eew that's grooooooss dude!
    i think u should repace "squeezing" with "heaving" b/c its more commonly used. and give it a title so peeps are warned.

    luv,
    lilz

    ps only 2 clappers b/c im so grossed out. say hi to michael 4 me!


  • liduen silver member
    September 17, 2008
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    Ugh blah? You think ugh blah about rollercoasters?

    Oh...wait...did you throwup or something...yeah, that is deffinatly humiliating.

    Anyways, Nice description and great poem, especially the last line!

    Title suggestions? ummm...Humiliation? ummmm...

    • StarIlluminated
      September 20, 2008
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      Um Katrina, the poem's about humiliation, not rollercoasters lol. haha well you made me laugh It's comparing humiliation to a rollercoaster.

      I have yet to throw up on a rollercoaster, YES!!