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Cancel my subscription

Did I subscribe to this,
bliss,
I didn't know,
this shit, could exist.

Am I a fantasist
or
sociopath;
where do I cross the line,
am I blind,
my mind
can only laugh,
at all the stuff that I had missed,


I listen to
your introverted point of view
you say
what's good for me
is good for you.
But you can

cancel my subscription

I concede
I'm giving in

Please tell me what you think

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  • individuality gold member
    March 18, 2009

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    i started thinking of the doors here with the line - cancel my subscription to the resurrection - a good poem.


  • Swan song gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    Now this is different but it is naked and agressive
    in that it is sensational

  • Deepredvelvet
    September 22, 2008

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    Hey now, how easy it would be if we could just cancel! you sound like me. To the point and a great piece.


  • Blueskywonder
    September 17, 2008

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    LOL
    Love the line cancel my subscription

    Great Write!


  • Errant Panther gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    strong voice speaking here, well done with expressing your opinion clearly to the the reader. just need to polish up a few spelling mistakes. "cancal = cancel" "subscibe = subscribe" "fantasist = fanaticist" "sociapath = sociopath"

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