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Me lil`o parrot

 

We be go`n to a hang`n
gonna watch em swing
They’ll do a lil`o hampton dance
ba`fore da pirate king

Me be bring`n me lil`o parrot
her squawk’n can hoist the dead
So maybe da stiffs be come`n alive
if`n they give er a crumb of bread

Swig`n da grog an chew`n da fat
while be`n a wee bit shy
But me and me lil`o parrot
we be get`n a hampton high

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 9
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    This is very funny - also great rhythm 'n rhyme. Suits the image pefectly, as does the background.

    Miss yer, Matey!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 16, 2008
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    Congratulations on the Silver award--
    Well Done!


  • penman gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Aww, such a great creation for the image. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • queen Moderators member
    September 16, 2008

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    Me likes the pirate talk very cute , thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 16, 2008

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    Excellent flow and very creative.
    Well done & Best of luck in the contest!


  • Lady Eventide
    September 16, 2008

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    Oh, by golly! This is definitely a winner. Love the nice, steady rhythm of this piece...really quite wonderful...and the way you wrote it made the poem seem so exceptionally well thought out...as if someone were really speaking and everything! Oh, most perfect! Well done. Good luck!

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