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Just a Guy

If you told Juliet
that Romeo
was just a guy
what do you think she'd say?

Romeo wasn't just a guy,
he was like a god
sent from heaven
or an angel.

So if you tell
any girl
that her guy,
her crush
is just a guy

you will be wrong,
he's her Romeo
she's his Juliet.

Back off
and let them be.

Author notes

This kind of sprung from a conversation that my friend and I were having when she said that the guy I like was just a guy.

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  • Topnotchsy
    September 23, 2008

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    I like this a lot, and I think the idea rings true. Every person on the planet is at once "just a guy/girl" and also someone's "Romeo/Juliet/hero/idol" etc. Really like this piece a lot!!


    • EmeraldOblivion
      September 23, 2008
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      Woah, I never thought of the person being "just a guy/girl" and "Romeo/Juliet" simmoteneously. Thanks a lot for the comment.

      • Topnotchsy
        September 23, 2008
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        Well I think that in the end we often look at most of the world as "just another guy/girl" while in fact every person is special and a "Romeo/Juliet" to someone.


  • Shannon62875
    September 16, 2008

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    This is a really good write... I totally understand this write and its so true... I agree that there could be more added to this because there is so much more to wrte.. you should enter my conest ill have up in a day or two.. keep up the great work!!!

    Shannon*Leah


  • This Is My Story
    September 16, 2008

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    This is a really good comparison between romeo and juliet and other relationships. I think you should add more though cause there is so much more you can add like the fact that romeo and juliet both died for each other


    • EmeraldOblivion
      September 24, 2008
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      That is a great idea. I am currently reworking it with that thought in mind. Thanks.

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