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Jump

Close your eyes and  jump
Because I'm ready to go
And I'm bringing you along
So we can fall for eachother

And its your eyes I'm looking at
The wind moving fast
Your hand I'm holding
The ground moving up

And its up to us to
Keep us from hitting the ground
I'm counting on you to keep me alive
And to keep my heart whole
And I promise I'll do the same

I know what its like
To hit the ground
And fall appart
But you saved me from that every time


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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    September 17, 2008
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    why are you so good at writing poems? it's unfair.


  • Shannon62875
    September 16, 2008
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    wow

    This is a really good write... I dont agree that it is all up to the other one... A relationship doesnt take one person, it takes both to get through things... Dont rely on other people.. You are just as much responsible as the other one.. It takes both people to work things out and keep them going, not just one....

    Shannon*Leah