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i found love

When you smile my heart sets on fire
thinking of you my head in its greatest desire
I dream of you cant get you out
when i scream your names the only one i shout

We fight all the time everyday,
when i ask you tell me your love for me you cant say
we argue about everything and ur frustration beams
my love for you will always be like a dream

i want to spend the rest of my life with you
the most amazing girl i ever knew
the way your eyes grin when your smile does
or when u give me those mischievous looks i get from the side

no matter how awful i am to you when i curse and yell
juss know for you i most deffinately fell
you make my heart make its way to my throat
with you as my girl all i wanna do is gloat

my dreams have finally come true
you got me there you got me through
i cant deny what you mean to me
your my heart my soul my everything and my baby...

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  • jstrauch
    September 21, 2008
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    this poem i wrote was stupid i dont even believe this anymore it means nothing i mean way more when i write about someone i truely love like flic


  • B0b
    September 16, 2008
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    not bad