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fold me up into a star,
i will shine among your sky

fold me into a box,
ill hold your darkest secrets

fold me into flower,
let me bloom with with vibrant color,
show all i can be

fold me up into swan,
so pure and a heart of gold
a heart i am willing to give

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option 15

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  • sailor ptolema
    October 8, 2008

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    unadulterated love, that's what this is

    thanks for entering.

    pt


  • ml12
    September 21, 2008

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    I loved the simplicity and repetition in this piece. The images were good and I think that the last line summed the whole poem up well. Good luck in the contest