fold me up into a star,
i will shine among your sky
fold me into a box,
ill hold your darkest secrets
fold me into flower,
let me bloom with with vibrant color,
show all i can be
fold me up into swan,
so pure and a heart of gold
a heart i am willing to give
Author notes
option 15
A contest entry
- -Bohemian Rhapsody- by sailor ptolema.
1100 points, ended October 9, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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unadulterated love, that's what this is

thanks for entering.
pt
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I loved the simplicity and repetition in this piece. The images were good and I think that the last line summed the whole poem up well. Good luck in the contest



