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in love. with love. to my love.

I will never ever
pirouette inside
the way I did the day
you said you loved me.
[[&& I'll always be your baby]]

I'm calling out your name
at night as I am sleeping
sound, but cold here
in my bed without you
[I am freezing].
Though my thoughts of you are warm:
[[I'm dreaming]]

How will I ever
sing a song so soft it
falls upon your ear
just like a whispered
lullaby on
feather wings of light
and grace and beauty
hushing you to sleep now.
[[slip into a dream, doll]]

I will cry
when you're not with me
and I'll smile for you, my love
mysterious and sweetly--
[[For only you, my baby]]

I'll beg 10,000 angels
flying overhead
to let us be. to
let us just be happy--
for as long as
God would let us live
as one together.
[[til the end of time, my love]]

And I'll wish upon a star
when no one is around
but you and I, that
this will be forever.
[[you and me--forever]]

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this is for my baby.

i love u alyssa jaye. <3

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  • xXxOpheliacXxX
    September 18, 2008

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    AMAZING

    you and your poetry...whoa! amazing! you are amazing talented and just--COOL keep writing and I'll keep reading
    your bestest buddie/homie/shorty xD
    LEA♥

  • spideracer gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    How sweet

    I don't quite get the last comment, obviously they haven't read your profile, for if they had, they would know you're a girl. Anyway enough said about that, yet again you shine as a poet, this write clearly shows your love for baby Alyssa Jaye. Great job you've done here, full of sweet emotions and the flow is awesome. Keep writing the magic and take care.


  • Shannon62875
    September 16, 2008

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    WOW~

    The way this sounds.... you are a guy... this is amazing coming from a guy. I wish i could get one guy to write me a poem like this to me and it be about me... You did such a great job. You are a very talented writer.. I feel that same way when im not with my baby jason.... I hope you two are happy and by this poem really sounds like you are... Good luck in that.. Keep up the great work!!!

    Shannon*Leah


    • xwarriorXprincessx
      September 16, 2008
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      thanks but... um?

      am not a guy.

      ... am very sweet lesbian.

      but thank u for the sentiment