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Pure Confection.

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Shaded in tones of caramel,
smothered,
with the treacle of life,
dripping as fondant lies.
Iced water,
cools the sweet
cravings of promises
never kept.
Fudged,
wrapped up in the
struggle of deceit, 
brittle emotions,
cracked,
as glace.
Cherry lips
invite
strawberry
kisses,
tempting delight.
Forgotten Bonbons
of desire,
spark midnight minted
stars in the celestrial
atmosphere.
Mocha meets Cappachino
in the waltz of
liquid gold,
tripping the tongue
in it's overload
of temptation,

 

 

 

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  • Rowan Oak
    September 24, 2008

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    yummy! This poem makes me want chocolate in the worst way! What have you done to me!!??lol Great job!


  • sweet innocence
    September 18, 2008
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    i enjoyed reading this amazing poem! you made a fine piece of write filled with imagery.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    This composition certainly gave my sweet tooth a craving!
    Well Done & Very Very Well Written!

    • cutiepie gold member
      September 17, 2008
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      Lol...yes, I have a sweet tooth ,also late at night the urge often attacks the taste buds Glad you enjoyed it


  • Sally19
    September 16, 2008
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    yay!

    sexy i like it!


  • ProudMomma
    September 16, 2008

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    Great write i really like this...kinda sensual and made me crave coffee for some reason great write!


    • cutiepie gold member
      September 17, 2008
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      Thank you...yes, coffee and chocolate is a good mix


  • OctoberCrush
    September 16, 2008

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    Wow...
    That leaves alot of flavors on your tongue...

    Nice job. I really enjoyed reading that. **<3**

  • Robin Greene
    September 16, 2008
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    Nicely Different

    Certainly makes the imagination work!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Metaphors Galore!

    This is a really creative piece. I really enjoyed it! The metaphors were brilliant and provided great imagery. Find a contest for this one!


    • cutiepie gold member
      September 16, 2008
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      Thank you for your lovely comments I must have been feeling peckish

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