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Earth Tremors

Ground shaking tremors;


crimson rose
etched casket,
ascending from
darkest depths,

laid bare.

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13 words
Picture prompt
http://ladyshamisen.deviantart.com/art/Wandering-Child-52763049

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008
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    Beautifully dark on this prompt, I like your word choice, well done. Best to you in the contest


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    I think this is great for the picture prompt! Well done. Good luck in the contest!