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Your last smell





For the last servile feather
  repulsively dancing
  on trembling fingers
        ~claustrophobic~





  graves cry.



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  • Judith Chandler
    February 1

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    I am puzzled by this but I like the phrase "servile feather".

    It just occured to me what it might be about but I won't spoil it for anyone else.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    This is a really dark take on the prompt, well worded, gave me a lot to think about. Best to you in the contest


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Excellent....

    Hey girlie...it's up twice

    And I must say I love the background of the other one better, with the picture link...

    But your words are as mysterious as always...

    XXJeannette