INTRO
Baby your love hurts me,
'Cos it ain't for me,
And I've seen you through,
How could you?
VERSE 1
Now I've been thinking,
Of our past times,
About how we used to make love endlessly.
But now that's gone,
I've gotta carry on,
I've gotta be strong.
You keep trying to come back,
(Come back)
Make up for the things I lack,
(Things I lack)
But love hurts,
(Love hurts)
It won't work,
(It won't work)
Just stop trying and things will be alright.
Just...
CHORUS
Breathe,
Breathe in that pure air,
Breathe,
If you can't breathe here, then where?
Breathe,
Your love with another just, ain't fair,
Breathe,
I love you but I, can't share,
Breathe,
(Breathe breathe)
Breathe,
Oh, yeah.
VERSE 2
Just try it on with me,
One last time,
Don't think about the consequences.
Oh, love me one, last time,
And feel our passion burn.
I know I should move on,
(Move on)
And be strong,
(Be strong)
Where did it go wrong?
(Go wrong)
Baby just come along,
(Come along)
Just stop trying and these will be alright.
Just...
CHORUS
Breathe,
Breathe in that pure air,
Breathe,
If you can't breathe here, then where?
Breathe,
Your love with another just, ain't fair,
Breathe,
I love you but I, can't share,
Breathe,
(Breathe breathe)
Breathe,
(Breathe breathe)
Yeah!
M8
You gotta breathe in,
(Breathe in)
And breathe out,
(Breathe out)
Stop asking,
(Asking)
And don't doubt,
(Don't doubt)
I love you,
Oh yes I love you,
Baby just breathe yeah,
Breathe yeah,
Just breathe.
(music for 15 secs)
(crescendo)
(music stops)
Breathe.
CHORUS x2
Breathe.
Author notes
04:15 Inspired by 'Breathe' by Blu Cantrell
Comments
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Lovey dovey
I think your song is very pretty and shows a lot of emotion. Love is to me the most painful human condition at times. I think your poem captures the pain of love perfectly. -
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Thanks Katilina, I do enjoy doing my own versions on popular songs. Thanks for your comment.
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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wow... this would definitely make an awesome song! if you have the music for this, woot, you'd be a leged, hahah! great piece, keep making songs dude.
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Thanks Beauty of Silence, the music that would go with it, sort of, is 'Breathe' by Blu Cantrell.
Thanks for your comment
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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I don't know the song you have based this on, but as lyrics go, this sounds good to me. Do you have the music to go with it?
All the best ... Sue
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Thanks for the comment and applauds Sue. The only music that would go is Breathe by Blu Cantrell, but only the chorus is similar, the rest isn't, but you could go to Youtube and type in Breathe by Blu Cantrell and choose one, and check it out
Thanks again
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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