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Gone but not Gone

Dedicated to all believers!



He died,
She cried,
He watched over
His former lover
At his graveside.



Copyright:K:September 2008

Author notes

Please credit artist:
http://emzofc.deviantart.com/art/This-is-it-98091041

Picture depicts:
Female at the graveside of her lover with his ghost watching
over her. Sepia format roses in red.



Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
13 words
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2421149
Picture is the prompt
13 words
Show me what I can't see
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Comments


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    I like this but I am not sure I like the use of all the other pictures on here, it detracts from the original picture given, almost like cheating but with pictures to complete the story lol. Very ingenuitive. Best to you in the contest


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Well done here

    So much said in such a short piece . Good luck in the contest


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 16, 2008

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    excellent~

    Very emotive
    I would never thought of this one
    Tonight my mind is blank
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~~