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Delicate Dances

The wind was blowing
The sky was blue
My world was living
My heart was true
A hand to hold,
A mouth to feed
A life to love
Is all I need
Nature's bounty
Magic fire
Escape the day
My one desire
I'm warm, I'm home,
I'm lost in love
You're all I need
In the sky above

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  • Rovingone gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    A very sweet poem with a lot of feeling. Thankyou for your entry.

  • Malzy
    September 16, 2008

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    Hey
    I cant write a poem that rhymes without it sounding cheesy or forced, its just not my style but this is a wonderfully written poem just everything blended together amazingly.
    Good job
    Malzy