Listen to me close
As I whisper in your ear.
I wouldnt want anyone else
besides you to hear
It started with a delicate
nibble of her ear
Forgetting all etiquette
Hand were drawing near
My fingertips slid
beneath waves of cotton.
reaching a treasure well hid
Conscious fears forgotten
As i lean in
My breath on your neck
I see the little hairs
standing erect.
Your concentrations mine
your appetite's delight
as you are enthralled
by my night of exite
Author notes
work in progress so far 
let me know what you think.
Its about 2 friends, and one is entertaiing the other with one of their saucy escapades.
i think it needs more of a story. what do you think?
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i like it.. it's exciting and it makes me so impatient to know the continuation of it.. like i'm reading each line wanting to unravel the next step. it's good very good
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thanks!!! thats what i wanted!
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