I danced in colors
of free tomorrows,
on a breeze of
magnolia scents,
until the day
my dreams
tangled around
your intentions
~and I learned
a new way to fly.
Author notes
wound around your finger
A contest entry
- prompt: wound around your finger by going nowhere.
600 points, ended September 16, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silver to Gold by Age of Rain.
360 points, ended September 27, 2008, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow...beautiful words filled with a soft romantic fibration..
I knew why I wanted you as my favorite
Although I am not much on anymore I never forget that
The shiny is well deserved...
XXJeannette
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Wow!
Wow wow wow wow wow wow!
Excellent writing. So elegant and exquisite.
Soft and passionate with the scent of romance
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You capture me, something about your writing is sublime. I can see why this easily won a shiny silver trophy. In my book it wa gold. You have a wonderful talent. Best to you
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This is sweet and well-expressed.
Congrats on the Silver.
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Congrats on the silver sweetie. You have created such a beautiful poem. The imagery is truly beautiful.
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beautifuil mama
i love you -
A wonderful poem of the change in direction we take when love enters our world.
Congratulations on the Silver.
Love
Don
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tis a happy happy poem
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i love this... with such softness of change. dancing along until that someone comes along and changes things forever... hopefully with a magnolis scent remaining.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
We do follow our dreams but when a person comes into our lives and captures our hearts our dreams begin to become a part of theirs.
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