Pretty pert
Underwhelmed
Nonsense
A contest entry
- "The Kookaburra" Open to all. [Winklings # 124 ] by Lyndon.
1800 points, ended October 2, 2008, 18 entries
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How was it for you?
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hum... never thought that I would hear the word underwhelmed... hummmm... interesting.
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My commiserations - here be my dictionary definition (and, as they say: I have a very big dic!!!)
verb: underwhelm
1. (usually humorous) fail to be impress or excite
Glad to help you lurm more abowt proper yuse of werds LOL
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interesting
I learn new things all the time. I was not awair of this form of poetry. I will have to check it out. Good use of words, The Shaker
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Pun was forlorn because it was not pretty or pert became underwhelmed over the nonsense and fell asleep? Is this what you are saying here??
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Hi
Loved the funny side of this! I like snappy short pieces and this is great!
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this fits me to a "t" lol. I am pretty, pert, underwhelmed and filled witn nonsense
not really. I hardly think of myself as pretty. This was short but nice.
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Strange, but interesting prompt and contest. I think you did very well.
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This made me smile 
I love the alliteration of the first two words too. Very effective! Best of luck in the contest!
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This Kookaburra made me giggle, good work. Best of luck in the contest.
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Really Cool One
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sorry, I loved this.
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Gosh, that was quick!! Why be sorry?
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unexpected timing. I was deep in thought, this was contrary to thoughts, sort of.
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