Laying here feeling the embrace of my lover
I feel a soft kiss fall upon my neck
My body lights up with passion
Wandering hands tease my most sensitive areas
And the feel of him is rock hard on my back
My lover, my best friend, how can I live without you
The passionate lovemaking is what makes us unique
Staring into your eyes, I feel at home
My body and soul is one with you
As the climax draws closer, my mind plays a trick on me
I thought I heard you say I love you
As you finish and lay next to me
Your hands stoke my face and neck
Your fingers finds its way to my chin and lifts my head to you
You gently peck my lips and say it once more
I look into your eyes, deep, and reply I love you too
Author notes
not really a poem but me and my husbands first night
A contest entry
- listen to your heart... by Mrs. Priester.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wut u think
Comments
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wow.
this is really good. i like it alot. lol. good luck in my contest
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*sighs*
This made my heart skip a beat, just the way things escalated you have a wonderful way with words. What I really honestly enjoyed the most was that it was tasteful not trashy.
I really enjoyed this line
-As the climax draws closer, my mind plays a trick on me
I thought I heard you say I love you-
Good Job
Malzy
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