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If i tell you

If i tell you i love you
will you look at me the same way?

if i tell you i love you
will you turn and walk away?

if i tell you i love you
will you smile and say my name?

if i tell you i love you
im dying to know will you feel the same?

if i tell you i love you
will it change things between you and i?

if i tell you i love you
and you walk away from me i think i will die!

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  • Emerald-Eyes
    September 16, 2008

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    sweet

    I really like this
    Those are all questions that people think about when they love someone, and I think you capture the debate people have with themselves very well.


    • whispersoftly
      September 16, 2008
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      Thankyou, just some things i have been thinking about lol thanks for the applause xx c