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waves

as i walk into the water
i feel the cold waves kiss my body
as i enter i feel weightless
i feel FREE for my every day
something new something different
wanting to drift away forever
as i drive down i feel
the coldness kiss my skin
the surface calles my name
but the water brings me
a painfull bliss
feel the water run along my body
but my body calls for air
never wanting to leave
the water welcomes
i feel like i belong here
everything and nothing makes sence

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  • Danna Hobart
    September 21, 2008
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    Thanks for entering.