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Trivial pursuit

The plastic pie
you played with
as a child

  Trivial pursuit
    or the necessity
to chase
when running out
the door

  we must be absolutely
crazy.
    love. hate. run. chase.
    love. hate. run. chase.
  ogopogos.

Author notes

ogopogo was a mythical creature said to infinitely chase it's own tale.

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    September 16, 2008
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    Sorry I am closing the contest. It appears to be controversial. Thanks for the entry.


  • elemental angel
    September 16, 2008
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    Great use of metaphor, kinda reminded me... can only be good thing lol.
    Bravo