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Guilty Desire

my secret
burns beneath my breast
a yearning so strong
full of torment

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    So sad and torturous. You capture the emotion of this picture very well with so few words. Best to you in the contest


  • Pretty.Rave.Boy
    September 17, 2008

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    A beautiful picture, and a beautiful poem to go with it.
    How strong, short, and nice. Goodluck on the gold in the contest!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Great little write for this beautiful picture prompt. It's full of deep emotion. Shows great creativity and depth! Well done. Good luck in the contest!