I'm kind and patient
I love to dream
I'm anything I want to be
A bird flying in the sky
The sunshine that fades
and passes by
I'm caring and forgiving
Like a mother to her child
and a preacher forgiving
a sinner of sins
I'm the wind beneath
your wings as every
new day begins
I can be anything that I
want to be but for right
now I'm simply me
A contest entry
- Sinner or Saint by Ken-Maverick.
650 points, ended September 22, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this was the first thing that came to mind hope you like
Comments
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first i like to say i love the background and your poem living a saints life perfect i can imagine the bird flying and the mother holding her child as if time stood still and in the end your simply you you seem to be great at observing things keep up the good work
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Your poems are enjoyable reads. They flow effortlessly with a gentle sweetness.
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You are simply you and no one can take that away from you, Really enjoyed the read,
And thanks for the entry
All the best
Ken -
oh, you have such a nice flow. and you seam to be a very nice person, to... i love this.
just one thing, though; you might want to rethink the line breaks of the end stanza, it kind of messes with the rythm of the words.
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