You said goodbye, yet I could not cry.
So the rain cried for me, it froze me while I cried on the inside this time. The gray clouds above me reflect my mood of gloom.
I have already cried so many tears over you and the pain you inflicted on me. I seem to have become addicted to like it is nothing new. Use me again master just don't throw me aside. Oh how I wish I could run and hide from all the pain you caused deep down inside. I would not cared if I died.
All I want is to be by your side.
I love you like I loved you then.I just don't know if and when. How can I go back to being just your friend? The memories of you and me are now plaguing all of my dreams.
The wind blows fiercely through my hair as I watch its destruction with much reluctance.
The wind is preluding my anger at how you went about your betrayal.
You replaced me so easily, I wonder if you ever did love me.
The sad thing is I blame myself, I guess I was just not good enough.
I hope your happy and can live with yourself for what you did.
I will never be the same, now I see your kind of lame for playing all these games.
You chose her over me what more can you do to hurt me?
What more do you want from me?
You said goodbye it made me,cry now all I wish is for the memories of you to leave me and just let me be.
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- MAKE ME FEEL by Cena-of-Destiny.
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Your poem is touching although... kinda standardised.
I bet that this love story began and ended during your teens. And I also bet that you broke-up in a harsh manner; no friendship afterwards. This is sad, not bad, not wrong.
Me and my ex-, for instance, remained friends because, in a way, we have some common ground to bind us in friendship, but... not that much to get us back together. And yeah, we both chose to live the memory in a more hilarious way; no more lament for nothing. 
Boy, I'm sorry for my typing. I kinda lack the exercise of English Grammar and Orthography.
So, what I'm trying to say is that... two people, regardless of their sexes, should at least TRY remain friends if they do have some common points. Just look at Jerry Seinfeld's persona! He and Elaine are still friends!
P.S. Nice touch of Romanticism, methinks.
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This is wow! AMAZING! JUST WOW so sad :/ but a beautiful write good luck
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This is...
Dedicated to my ex boyfriend John York.
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