The breath of life flows freely,
through new lungs and new ideas,
as the sands of time prepare
for another layer of history.
In God's image they are made,
and in God's delight they forsake,
yet the winds of change brew amidst
the flesh and bone.
A storm of dominance,
of power and humanity,
Of hope.
Author notes
Achelos. I know the pic is of achelos, but i wanted to use the pic instead of what i knew the pic depicted.
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Comments
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A storm of dominance,
of power and humanity,
Of hope.
Love those lines
Thank you for your lovely poem
Best wishes
Julie
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A wonderful interpretation of the image... more feelings and less description which makes this creative and unique. Well done and best of luck...
Ken



