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Storm.

The breath of life flows freely,
through new lungs and new ideas,
as the sands of time prepare
for another layer of history.
In God's image they are made,
and in God's delight they forsake,
yet the winds of change brew amidst
the flesh and bone.
A storm of dominance,
of power and humanity,
Of hope.

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Achelos. I know the pic is of achelos, but i wanted to use the pic instead of what i knew the pic depicted.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    A storm of dominance,
    of power and humanity,
    Of hope.
    Love those lines
    Thank you for your lovely poem
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • KayJay
    September 16, 2008

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    A wonderful interpretation of the image... more feelings and less description which makes this creative and unique. Well done and best of luck...
    Ken