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angry skies

I am tossed out
of heaven above
my sole crime
that I chose to love.

Not just to love
but to love a mortal man.

This angered my master
he spoke cruel words to me
and then lightning struck
and I found myself flying,
falling,
screaming out his name.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Oh this is very sad a most creative take on the prompt. Thanks so much for your entry
    gaylene