Don't hope
to find more graves
in graveyard
than in this
running city...
A contest entry
- 13 words by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 24 entries
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This is an interesting interpretation of the prompt here, I can't say I understand it completely but great job. Best to you in the contest
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Hmm... actually this was in face of Delhi blasts... about 5 bombs was found active, 3 exploded in the mid day... And the victims don't even have money to burn their dead relatives... The bodies are like openly... That's why... the city turned into a graveyard...
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This is a very hard hitting poem - I really like the tone that you have created here, great choice for the 13 words
- I hope that you do well in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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Thanks dear... hey guess what... toady we enjoyed a lot... I walked almost about 8 km without a break... howz dat... nice na?
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Powerful poem!
This is a very powerful poem! I think it it has meaning for one of your larger cities, Delhi, perhaps? This is a strange construction and statement, but possibly a hopeful, not a dark one! I like this poem!
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