love is a liquid
takes shape of vessel
comprehend empty
occupy its spaces
smooth are its ways
flows as water
descending without effort
as it traverse
gathers many into fold
love follows water logic
fits into any shape
rocks fit into one other
when chisseled
they hold together in friction
unlike frictionless water
love is all about caring
merging conscience
mixing into each other
as water and milk
Author notes
Explaining how much I love you is like explaining how water tastes, it's impossible!" --submitted by Tia
A contest entry
- Lovingly Quoted by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended September 29, 2008, 9 entries
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I still think this is wonderfully written...
A fine sharing in the contest
Thank you and be immensely blessed! -
Love is unexplainable for sure
Thank you for sharing in this contest
Blessings,
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you commented on poem when it is incomplete. Kindly give one more glance, thank you
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