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Ashes to Ashes

Decomposing ashes
rise upwards,
veiling hallowed ground;

colors dissolving,
fading into,


murky obscurity.

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Picture prompt
http://ladyshamisen.deviantart.com/art/Wandering-Child-52763049

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    This is a really dark take on the prompt. You capture the darkness of this picture so well. Best to you in the contest