A beginning
a new day starting out
so bright
so clean
so crisp.
The red gold of the light
as the new day dawns
so pleasant and peaceful.
I would love to walk here
in its shadow.
A strength
as water and rock
come together
always changing
always creating.
Life.
The shore line teeming
with the many forms of animals
large and small
I see them.
Time
another day
to continue on.
Author notes
You said not to mention the picture so I didn't. However, when I looked at the picture I saw all this. I hope it is what you wanted. I wanted to give Paloszoo credit for the wonderful new title. It fits in perfectly I think.
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- Picture Inspiration IX by Samplette.
1000 points, ended September 17, 2008, 11 entries
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A New Beginning
How 'bout that as a title?
This is a wonderful poem, which I really enjoyed. Great imagery and unique form. Good luck in the contest! -
Very nicely done. Great take on the picture. I think a better title is within you, but other than that a lovely piece. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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sorry but don't like the title you suggested. Tho if someone did come up with one that I liked I wouldn't mind changing it to that title. But I think i'll stick with the one I have for right now.
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I didn't suggest a title...I said, I thought a better title was within you...inside of you...
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