The rose,
which transcends
time and eternity
still bonds two souls
together,
forever.
Author notes
picture credit:
http://ladyshamisen.deviantart.com/art/Wandering-Child-52763049
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A contest entry
- 13 words by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Fitting!
Great write for the prompt! The rose is a symbol of enduring love & it certainly depicts a bond of love in this picture!
You've a poignant way of expressing concepts & images come to life in your poetry!
Bravo.
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Dark tinges to this little gem. I really like this very much. We are bound often by symbols that hide our reality.
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This is beautiful and tender and I love this, no more words need be said. Best to you in the contest
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BEAUTIFUL!
This is very beautiful. A great take on the prompt. Very well done. Good luck in the contest. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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for through time ,the simple rose hold the hands of love every so softly...given in life and a comfort in death, your words my brother, are beautiful
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excellent~
Touching indeed
Love it
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~~
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nice, this is very romantic and touching! very nice use of words xx c good luck in the contest
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