Dancing overhead a mantle so bold
In colours resplendent against blue skies
This message of life for us to behold
Seasons always changing before our eyes.
A signal from God that life will renew
Oh how splendidly creation unfolds
Cherish this richness of majestic hue
Many reds, oranges and burnished golds.
Such an enchanting stage to tread life's road
Giving warmth to hearts that are cold and dark
Autumn's heavenly colours now explode
For souls that are heavy, God gives a spark.
Gateway to paradise, follow with hope
All of life's trials in sureness we'll cope.
In colours resplendent against blue skies
This message of life for us to behold
Seasons always changing before our eyes.
A signal from God that life will renew
Oh how splendidly creation unfolds
Cherish this richness of majestic hue
Many reds, oranges and burnished golds.
Such an enchanting stage to tread life's road
Giving warmth to hearts that are cold and dark
Autumn's heavenly colours now explode
For souls that are heavy, God gives a spark.
Gateway to paradise, follow with hope
All of life's trials in sureness we'll cope.
Author notes
Shakespearean Sonnet
A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme
A Shakespearean (English) sonnet has three quatrains and a couplet, and rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XI by Samplette.
2100 points, ended September 20, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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that's a beautiful sonnet. i beleive i would like to start writing sonnets. thank you for the inspiration. -s


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If you do write one I would love to read it
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A beautiful sonnet filled with all the hues of Autumn. Simply breathtaking, and so worthy of the Silver Cup! Congratulations!
Much Love ♥
Renee


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You do wonderfully with any kind of form don't you. Lovely piece. Autumn is my favourite, hence my name. You give life and beauty to nature in the best kind of way. Best to you in the contest


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An Awesome Moment in Time...
The season of golden promises of restoration and hope is lovingly expressed from the heart with this soulful masterpiece.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful, timeless sonnet of faith with us.
Wishing you all the best of luck in this contest!!!
Peace, Cyn
P.S. Happy Birthday, Poetess - and many More!!! 


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Beautiful and Stunning
A breathtaking write about one of my favorite seasons. Thank you so much for sharing this my poem "Autumn" pales in comparison to this amazing work. You have brought forth everything I feel about the season. Niaish, for sharing and I hope you have a blessed birthday!

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BREATH TAKING
So rich with beauty and encouragement...through our Fathers gifts, Mother Earth sends all her love to lift us up above the trials and sadness's we face...sighs...winner wrote all over it
niaish sweet soul for sharing such beauty with me




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An amazingly written sonnet. Beautiful imagery, with soft tone and easy flow. Great rhyme and rhythm. Very well written. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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