Kneeling beside the grave
The roses bring tears
Of passion and lost hope...
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- 13 words by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Are mirrors magical?
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This is a great take on the prompt, I would ask if you enter my contests again though, please don't put your username anywhere. It is unfair to the blind judging process. Best to you in the contest
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wow a wonderful take on the promt etched with deep raw imagery and emotion good luck in the contest
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saying so little yet meaning so much, short it may be, yet full of mystery and wonder it has, deeply thought provoking.
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This is very sad.... Death is a permenant state of ending, but never takes the love we hold.
Nice write ~ good luck in the contest! -
for just 13 words I think you did a wonderful job on the prompt
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