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Autumn Spires

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To wake on Autumn mornings when the first rays of the sun
will tinge the sky with red to greet the day,
your heart will be uplifted as the magic spell is spun
and the sight will melt your troubles on the way.

The spires of nature’s beauty rise like fingers to the skies
ablaze with golds of every shade and hue,
a russet carpet under foot produces many sighs
soon chilly winter breezes will be due.

Piercing shafts of gold that cut through early Autumn mist
dissecting chill and cold to warm the earth,
the harvest safely gathered as the land is softly kissed
all life prepares for sleep and Springs re-birth.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • moonbumps silver member
    September 18, 2008

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    Nature poems are one of the subjects you really excel at Sunshine....beautiful imagery as always-
    Hilly xxx


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    Another composition you have penned with flawless flow of the unforced rhyming verse!
    Well Done & Very Very Well Written!


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 16, 2008

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    I really like all your Autumn poems they are so beautiful and remind me of when I used to live back in the valley!! Sue I don't even know how to comment!! Your poems are much much to wonderful for my words I can't express!! This is FABULOUS!! I LOVE IT!!!


  • Sunshine Always
    September 16, 2008

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    You are writing so much of the things I love most lately Sue. Nature is and has always been my great love in life, and I thank you once more for reminding me of its never ending beauty with your wonderfulwords and imagery.No luck needed with this one ...mal


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    I love this! The imagery is just beautiful and the poem is perfect for the picture. Absolutely lovely Sue.

    Annie


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Pretty poem, indeed.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Samplette gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Lovely imagery throughout. Beautifully crafted. A wonderful take on the picture. Thank you for entering.
    Sam

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