Passionate summer heat
slowly departs
Our heart’s still find
one another
and
exist together
in soothing autumn air
We stroll hand in hand
as leaves drift down
dancing,
playing games with curiosity
Mine too, grows with your touch
circling my shoulder
with a finger
no longer
lost to this world,
now
only yours…
Captured,
locked away in special place
sweet memories
images of love;
priceless
shared here today.
Author notes
credit pic to photobucket
In a list
A contest entry
- BIG Points; Lots Of Options-- All About AUTUMN* by perfectsunset.
1800 points, ended October 14, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing imagery! I was hooked
Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed it very much!
A great piece here!
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Thank you so much
I hope soon to return the favour for you, once i finish my latest write
Cindy
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Wonderfully warm and loving imagery... part imagination, part memory, all heart... Beautifully done.
Ken
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Excellent
'tis a fine write, indeed. Brings back warm and fuzzy memories. You've expressed your thoughts quite well. Again, well done.
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We stroll hand in hand
as leaves drift down
dancing,
playing games with curiosity
leaves do feel like curiosity ...excellent discription ...I could see them swirling around in colors....the whole write is good ...but this one painted the canvas...peace Katie
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Soft and loving poetry, a sigh in a bottle to take out and savour
Lovely stuff.
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Aww; this was so beautifully-crafted.
Such serenity flowing through your
words & gorgeous imagery throughout.
Empowered by deep emotion & well-crafted
elaborations. So many clever thoughts
within this piece- masterpiece.
So very warm & touching.
Loved this dearly.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Thank you, such an inspiring picture, a joy to write for it
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very lovely
A sweet walk through a creative mind, and heart full of love.
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Thank you
Cindy
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This poem is so beautiful, and full of love! You've penned something briliant here.
Best of luck in the contest!
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thanx darl, i just so fell in love with the pic hehe
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Love the picture.. love autumn... I'm always sad to see summer end, but you've captured the magic autumn offers perfectly
Love, Stacy
. Rewarded 4
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Thank you, I try hehe
Cindy
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