its okay to cry
to feel betrayed
mourn for the moments
never spent
Author notes
credit : http://ladyshamisen.deviantart.com/art/Wandering-Child-52763049
A contest entry
- 13 words by AutumnGypsy.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so true, it is hard to let yourself the licence to cry. Great job, best to you in the contest
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How sadly written. Every word is so true. Thank you for sharing. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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ahhhh little sis
your encouragement and kind words always make me feel i can accomplish anything.....thank you for your comment and the care behind it
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jaded teardrop
this is beautiful. i really hope you win because this is so beautliful and really fits the contest.
its okay to cry
to feel betrayed
mourn for the moments
never spent
i was trying to just chose one part that i liked the best, but i liked the whole thing, i could't just choose one part. keep writing and good luck in the contest!!
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thank you
i'm so glad you liked it.....your comment and kind words greatly appreciated
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