My only feeling is relief
as you say goodbye
to your old lover.
Author notes
13 words only
pic prompt:http://emzofc.deviantart.com/art/This-is-it-98091041
A contest entry
- 13 words by AutumnGypsy.
450 points, ended September 25, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a direction I hadn't expected anyone to go in, in 13 words none the less. Best to you in the contest
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gee whiz you are great at these contests!! This was like a punch right in the kisser
Love, Lane


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nice use of the picture, it works well good luck in the contest xx cheryl
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A thought many of us would probably feel guilty about, but few of us would admit to.
An excellent 13 words, thoughts behind the picture.
All the best in the contest
Sue


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Great 13 words on the prompt! Fits the pic well. Best of luck!
Linda

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