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The young should never pass

A Loss
So sudden
so heart-breaking.

Cruel death should never
touch the young.

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I credit the artist of this picture. The picture is the prompt. And this is exactly 13 words longhttp://ladyshamisen.deviantart.com/art/Wandering-Child-52763049

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    This is a sad little piece, when I ask you to dredit artist, it needs to be cutting and pasting the link to the artist Best to you in the contest