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Yesterdays girl

Thrown away
I am useless
replaced
For I am yesterdays girl.

No gentle touches
no loving caresses
no strong arms to hold me.
No loving words
to tell me I am wanted
needed
loved.

For I am discarded
another has taken my place.

I am yesterdays girl
and as such
I am nothing.

Author notes

Yesterdays girl... I loved this and used it as my title. The picture is the prompt by the way. And I credit the artist.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 24

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    So emotionally entwined
    and full of depth.

    Beautifully penned as well!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Merry Christmas
    January 14

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    A dark poem filled with dark feelings and a dark ending. A good dark poem though, beautiful.

    Thanks for entering.


  • cbsbecm88
    October 18, 2008

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    this is a really good poem! i'm not the judge so don't worry, but it's about the opposite of love...still good poetry though!


  • Jesann gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    I really like this poem.
    "No loving words to tell me I'm wanted"
    "I am yesterdays girl"
    So sad...pic really enhances the emotion expressed here.


  • perfectdarkangel
    October 17, 2008

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    I love every poem you write, i can tell you put alot of heart into your work. I especially love this paice because I can relate to it so well. once again thanks for sharing this i cant wait to see more


  • dreamersalwayslive
    October 17, 2008

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    This was a wonderful poem to read. It flows amazingly well, and I like the way 'yesterday's girl' was represented. Lovely write!


  • TabbyCat
    October 9, 2008
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    This one is really good. Such a connection as I read...I have been yeasterday's girl. Sad.


  • misshugglebugglez
    September 28, 2008

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    aw, i really liked this! it made me feel really sad for
    "yesterday's girl", i just wanna give her a hug! nice work! i thought it was great! =)


    • trekkergirl
      October 2, 2008
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      I am glad that you liked "Yesterdays girl" and wanted to give her a hug to help her. It is a sad poem isn't it.


  • BehindTheShadow
    September 23, 2008
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    Nice job, good luck!

  • bballchic01
    September 21, 2008
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    love this poem so great
    it flows without ryming
    i <3 this poem

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