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Love received

My warm touch soothed
your skin soft and supple
Aching inside from!

Thoughts of me running
Through your mind
made my blood boil!

Each time my tongue toiched
Your cherry nipples erect
And your lips heated up!

The care I take
With caresses on your body
My desire burnt like fire!

Please tell me what you think

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 3
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    Very intriguing and passion filled write.

  • amysticwriter silver member
    February 7
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    Beautiful...


  • Chrysalis
    September 20, 2008

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    pouring in with such depth. . .

    your words flowed deeply into the readers thoughts I'm sure.

    Excellent write!


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    I have to agree with jcat...it's a little odd...for lack of a better word...okay, that's a lie. I can think of other words. To have written this about a person you don't know. Hmmm.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • jcat gold member
    September 17, 2008
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    Well besides the fact that your have this writtten in black font ontop of a black background making it impossible to read....I find it interesting that you wrote this about someone you do not even know?? Sorry, maybe I am confused here?? Interesting none the less.

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