I love and always will
I love you not for the thrill
I love you and it gives me chills
I will love you until the end of time
and I don't know why cuz' you were never even mine
inside of you is such a mess
some of it beautiful, some of it sad
but to think that I can't help you upsets me, it even makes me mad
if all I could do was hold you, it would be the perfect day
if I could only be there for you, and wipe you're tears away
but it hurts to hear that you lied, despite all the things that you say
don't want to be one of you're customers
because yours is a game I can't play.
Author notes
(A) by stella rose
A contest entry
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Comments
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"I love and always will
I love you not for the thrill"
Awesome start to this poem. Too many people think they're in love when they're really just in love with the thrill of romance.
Thanks for the entry and good luck!
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Ooh, I like this line "don't want to be one of your customers". Game players be gone! Thank you for the entry.
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excellent
i think u really show the inner pain of this really well, i can definitely see what you're expressing. I wish i had written this first, keep it up.
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very good
i love this poem it is well good, i can so relate to this poem
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