Beautiful and kind, yet sharp and clever
Willing to help everyone, naive forever
Crying for the world, bleeding for change
The ideal person, yet they think she's strange.
A heart of gold that aches for blissful peace
Fighting for the future, she will never cease
In her eyes lie painful secrets untold
Yet always full of fire, not the least bit cold.
She sees your soul by looking you in the eye
To her face you can never lie
For your soul is laid out for her to explore
Who is she? I can assure you, you will never be sure.
I know who she is but I wish I saw her more
For she is who I've been searching for
I've been lost but with her my life can begin
But to see her, I have to look deep within.
Author notes
Hmmmm........
Hope you like it!
A contest entry
- "To see you, I have to look deep within"-This is the prompt by Sensuity.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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thats freaken awesome!
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Fantastic!! I love the whole poem it's just beautiful.
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This is a splendid write! I must say that the emotions were so perfectly woven through these lines. The fatc that it did rhyme was so beautiful.Thank you very much for entering the contest and keep up the good writes.
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liked the poem, particularly last stanza
I know who she is but I wish I saw her more
For she is who I've been searching for
I've been lost but with her my life can begin
But to see her, I have to look deep within.
keep up the good work dear
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