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Autumn Blaze

a brilliant fall
ascending the strength of red
yellow, orange blaze

A contest entry

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  • ea silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    this is interesting to give the feeling of a "fall" ascending - nice word play, for the autumnal equinox.

    • haley27 gold member
      September 29, 2008
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      Thank u

      Thank you for the wonderful comments given to my contest. I like the applaudes too. Haley27


  • Arkbear gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Hello

     

    Brilliant = 2 syll  ...>>>

    http://www.wordcalc.com/index.php

    I really like the thought which went into this Ku'....most original....just watch out for count ~

     

    Not sure which counter you are using.....but this one is fail-proof ~

     

    Thank you for entering....God bless you!

     

    Bear ~


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    September 16, 2008

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    A most colorful description of the glory of the autumn. Nice!

    Dennis