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Yo-Ho and a Bottle o' Rum


On the seven seas we sail,
pilaging and without fail
what we sees and what we takes
if liked is ours, make no mistake.

Our mates we makes them walk the planks
should they sail without thanks
for all said and done by captain folk,
no matter how fine be the bloke.

We steal, we torture, do not bathe,
no pride in battle if unscathed.
We do not ask, we always touch;
we'll keep our ladies thankyou much.

Show disrespect and answer to
our entire, mighty crew.
We are pirates having pirate's fun,
yo-ho, yo-ho and a bottle o' rum.




Author notes

Hah I had loads of fun writing this.

Let me know what you think.



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  • smonte19124 silver member
    October 10

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    Loved the Humor of this write. Very entertaining and enjoyable to read the rhyme was great too. Love Rhyme. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Tarajane
    October 7

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    This is very creative with a few leaughs and smiles through. It's light hearted and funny which i do enjoy


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 16

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    Hehe love this hun...the way you've penned it, reads so ooo arrr Wicked write, made me smile widly Captured it brilliantly IMO. Best of luck in your contest