In absence of your heart
vibrations multiply
exhaustion stimulates my mind
I'm here teasing my senses
waiting you
A contest entry
- Loving You From Afar. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Set phrasers to STUN (This is a Contest.) by blind ecye dog.
850 points, ended October 17, 2008, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Teasing your senses huh!? . I wont ask you to expand on that! Good Luck in your contest.
Rose -
The words used here are perfect. I love this
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oooh, I did love this very much. Clean concise, and pretty smokin hot too! Good sensual/erotic writes hint,
You did that here, perfectly.
message is clearly and subtly stated, nice.
Excellent read.
Jin -
This is deliciosly short sweet and clever, love the line in abscence of your heart vibrations multiply. As many know i just love words and yours just dance a waltse on my tongue
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mmm,.. so many thoughts within this.. very interesting. perfect perfect. its amazing how much is said with so few words.
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Oh, this is great. Warm and sensual with such a depth of longing and desire. So few words and so many layers. Very well done.
Garrison
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Mind's eye open
Great title to connect with the physical longing evoked in these simple, but well placed, words. Very well done. RED
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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you said all you wanted to say in 5 lines... Absolutely loved this one. A grand write.
In Australia at the mo go home thurs though :-( you live in a wonderful place.
Keep up the writing Kym. Nice to read your work again.
Katey x
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