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The Hell We've Created

The Hell we've created
right, wrong
faded
jaded
truth shaded
new words updated
The Hell we've created
good,bad
happy,sad
mom,dad
a person's values
bought and sold
tarnished gold
The Hell we've created
up,down
sedated
elated
pass the drugs around.

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  • michichoeret
    September 28, 2008
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    welldone

    love the "shaded truth" image


  • destinyrevealed silver member
    September 15, 2008

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    Well done

    Nice poetic narrative of time, relationships, reality, functionality: a cycle of life. "a person's values bought and sold" - how unfortunate but true!