to look deep inside
one must understand.
That within us all there is our actual self.
To look deep inside,
And see our true self.
Is a major step that is hard to do.
but sometimes it must be done.
For the greater good of losing ourselves.
I must look inside now,
To find a truer meaning then this facade on the outside.
A contest entry
- "To see you, I have to look deep within"-This is the prompt by Sensuity.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whispering in your ear
Comments
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This was short, sweet and spicy! I loved the strong message that such a short piece like this bore.I must look inside now, to find a truer meaning than this facade on the outside, are my favourite lines. I think it is applicable to us all.Thanks for entering and sharing and good luck in the contest.
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