'maybe ive gone crazy' i think to myself
as ive done a multitude of times before
my eyes stare blankly at the impossible phrase
and yet, it all seems so right...
secrets can be forever hidden, no more
than the city can be completely silenced
than the world will stop spinning
than time in itself can freeze over for a while
these words finally reverberate in the back of my mind
perhaps they have been since that fateful day back in june
the hope i still clinged to is there
latched onto the price tag of the words i read
'but there is no price' i say quietly
'its all free, his treat, or more. maybe its true'
there is no way to grasp this concept
no way to contain the utter excitement my heart screamed
hours have passed, and still i have no regrets
i guess his secret was revealed at last
and to my last compliment of thanks
i will never forget the day he said i was his friend
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sorry if its cheesy. just something ive kind of been hoping for since forever.
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This one is very thoughtful and reflective. I feel like I'm taking a glimpse into your mind as these thoughts are filtering through. I enjoyed this write. Thanks for sharing.
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no problem. thankss
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ok, he said hewas joking when he said the whole 'i love you' gig. I slapped
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i know. this is different.
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ha. like it!
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o kali o kali
you care too much
but i guess we all do
good poem tho
i like the way it starts
and you think its gonna be
a poem about something random
but it slowly narrows down
to the boy being your friend
i like it. the ending is good
but the middle and begining are better
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thanks. i do not care too much! im just well happy that he actually said it and wasnt kidding.
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hi i like it, i feel like when you write you speak a foreign language! that i some times understand, this one is good though.
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haha thanks. i'll try to work on that.
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