By: D. Clark
During this New Age, Death will surround those who cause or wish it upon others,
Times will move faster as Sons and daughters will lose their fathers and mothers,
Hate, anger and greed will breed to exceed what the mortal soul will care to tell,
Those who will put blame on God for these years of great fears down to hell they fell,
Great tense urgency comes a one-world currency as both job and stock markets hit zero,
Winds these days blow still but hearts beat rapidly till during a third war to bring a new hero,
Then in dismay in a deceiving way this One World Evil lie to its race about aliens from space,
On the last page of the seven-year stage Gods judgments will come before all life’s case,
Faith must be stronger in any form of religion or even in ones self during these trying days,
For if faith is given in any form of love beyond the norm will come blessings in many ways,
Peace must be won of this race of one to win this final challenge that could fall from space,
We all have only one mother in this system of nine brothers of beautiful grace a glorious place,
Forget all the fears shed only joyful tears keep your soul intact to hell and back with a golden heart,
There will be no end only a new time will begin with a cleansed soul transcends to a brand new start,
Ocean waters will rise as tall as the blood filled skies but hope and glory never dies, it will be cherished,
A word will be heard all over this world, this word shall be “Victory!” while evil in all forms, perished,
So view her fiery dance warning of a never forgotten morning when global peace returns his son,
Because in my heart without a doubt ends all foes begins new friends for Tribulations Has Begun!
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Author notes
Written February 27th, 2002
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don't touch it!
FE this is awesome..well written... and don,t listen to that Evo..~~~GILL~~~ -
don't touch it!
Well written Foretold
Now get your butt on my site and read some of my new poems lol
Blessings
Susan~~~ -
?? what kind of comment is this also im a male. lack of intelligence these days.
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It's Going to Be a little more fucked up than this Ms. Cleo
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coming to me wanting everything you will never have~
out of all the comments you ever made you managed to
make 3 words come out...
so how ugly are you really for you to be here....
with no talent and all lacking
i bet your either diseased skinny no teeth because your dad fucked them out
or your really fat because your mother kept you on her nipple until last night...
you are acne prone with the oil polluting pours from your ass banging fetish...
scat eater for sure... your breath is no joke...
your barely learning how to read because your
only know words off of gang bang homosexual porno tapes...
and you have to stay at home... spend your night and days on the inter net to find someone who will talk to you...
because everywhere you go.... your so ugly people
and animals run and get scared that youll fuck or eat them...
so ... you find a poetry site... to try and offend each of us enough so we could leave you notes like this that you could read over and over again... and know.. that someone actually knows you exists like a shit in the toilet kinda way....
that you were actually floating around long enough for us to smell your putrid stench...
keep this note... love it like you obsess over every inch of me..
i will be in your reoccurrence.... maybe... out of all of this...
you will let one of those sheep loose from your ass... long enough not to be so sodomized... and apply your missing abilities to a form of actual expression....
come to me Foreskin Events/hellrazor .. i own you....oXXXo -
still gnawing,
your stained glass window insipid.
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Good job, I liked this one.
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Oh yes, the tribulations will be horrifically unimaginable. That is why I don't care to think much about them.
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hmmm.. i definitely agree with rottingchrist.......
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The poem itself had a good form but the topic wasn't. I see this as a preaching, trying to scare others that don't believe.
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you tell it just as the Bible spells it out, yes the tribulation has begun and yet we have seen nothing for what is to come. let your spirit be filled for the religions shall crumble all as well as the jobs and stocks. Enterpenuers we all shall be to survive the new world about and around us. Believe in no one other than the ONe. go in peace my friend and share your love with all you may reach. ;)wink
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i think sometimes our eyes and ears are scaled over until we're ready to see and hear the truth... Very discriptive... not for the average reader.
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Very passionate, however it seems to come off as more of a
zealous rant than a spiritual poem. If one is into 'the end
times' than i imagine that one would find this poem very
meaningful. personnally i think that things will get much worse
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Wow... Powerful poem.... Nice form...
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ditto
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Revelations.
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Faith, Peace, Love, a strong universal and neverending message. Interesting write
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Nice form....-Zion
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Another Birthing Pain as they grow stronger each day...
A magnitude 7.6 earthquake in MINDANAO, PHILIPPINES has occurred at: 6.11N 124.12E Depth 33km Tue Mar 5 21:16:09 2002 UTC -
Foretold: This gives me the shivers & shakes! From whence cometh thine inspiration? Pray tell.
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thousand wrong thoughts
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interesting...
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Ramblings of a sane mind. Strong writing. Valid thoughts. Incredible.
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wow this is excellent, i enjoyed it very much. .and you're right. .great write.
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Thanks Citrus I hope it did its justice. And hope the message came through. : )
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oh blimey, I had to read this one three times....but it sunk in at last....most thought provoking too.
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I agree about that,
If we seek Hell, we'll find it!!! And there are lots who do because of the hardness of their hearts-straight from the words of Christ. -
Not to pick a theological fight or anything, but I think we create our own Hell. BTWW, Tim LaHaye is very popular in our library. Guess I should try him out.
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One day the answer to the question I am asked each day 'Are you a Christain?' will come as no doubt of Yes.
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OK thanks Tina im glad you liked it. : ) Yes your right just I find Revelations so interesting right now. Theres alot more other great scriptures also that is for sure. : ) I got a cool bible program that I was given. Makes it a lot easier to read each scripture. : )
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Well, I think you did very well on this. I like it. A lot of truth here. Keep reading, but hey there is even better stuff in that book than just Revelations. lol Great imagery. Thanks for sharing. :)
Tina -
Oh Foretold,
I think you have exceeded yourself. This is powerful and mind bogglingly thought prevoking!!! Great write man! :0)
Tommy -
You know.. Its almost like an abstract.. creative, amazing.. poem.. Very dangrous, and dark.. very deep and complex.
It is deffently rated, as one of my favorite writings. from now on. I really thought yu put your work in to this, and your thoughts, and feelings. I think that is what really topped off the richness, and expressions.
Thank you for sharing.
Shelly. -
Interesting.
~ Lilith -
Very well written despite the religion differences. I find it somewhat comforting that even though most fight over religion, we can see somewhat eye to eye. Very nice.
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Wow thanks so much Jara!!!!!! Im very touched on how your reactions were. God Bless! Thanks : ) : )
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INTENSE!! I am not to worried about damnation. God is here with us now. God is only hidden by tribulations, never threatened. All will be well. All is well, or so I believe. That was astonishing and powerful almost chilling
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i have faith that every one will get what they deserve in the end but not a lot of fait in god....however this is a great poem..very powerful...stellar work...
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...can't say I agree, but everyone has different beliefs and opinions...strong and well stated message...
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Amen, man... That's all I can say. Let's not be left behind... -Chris
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Your stuff is very deep Foretold Events. You write very well too. ~Melissa
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My problem with this is that it reminds me of the stuff put out by guys like Hal Lindsey and Tim LaHaye. The end times overdosing of these guys hardly approaches the level of bad science-fiction. It's all part and parcel of dispensational teaching which is a very late comer in church history. The victorious outlook of the Puritans, for example, was much closer to biblical reality.
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i liked the pace and the style, incredible
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this is good work foretold.
im hoping it comes soon
sooner the better.
like that symbol at the end. looks cool there.
good job
Jen -
Thanks nell. Times are going faster now. Signs are all before us.
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well FT this powerful
flowed very well!
i enjoyed :O)
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