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Love, Envy, Missed-Goodbye

I love you but I have to go
I love you but you'll never know
I love you laugh, your smile, your eyes
And when you look at me I'm filled with joy inside.
I am envious of how he looks at you
and how you look right back
I am envious of how you can taunt me with those lies
with those eyes...
But you'll never know
I have to go
Get out of this place
Before I fall to pieces
from this sickness- of loving you
I'll miss you-
I wish i could kiss you
But I have to get out here
Go anywhere but where I am now.
Miss those eyes.
Miss that smile.
Miss the opportunity.
This is my goodbye
My wish for you to know before you go-
Is that you will always be in my dreams
Goodbye, my love.

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  • SilverWolf
    September 18, 2008

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    awww that is soo sad!

    OMG I LOOOVE the last line!

    it sounds like a line from Romeo and Juliet!

    I LOVE that line! I LOVE this poem!


  • feigned lucidity
    September 15, 2008

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    it's very real and again, very sad. nice job!


    "what's meant to be will always find a way."


    • Lieblos
      September 15, 2008
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      I hope your right!! Thanks for your comment sis it means a lot!!